Sunday, December 27, 2009

Shaded Baby Float What Do You Think Of My 2 Poems? Comments And How I Can Improve?

What do you think of my 2 poems? Comments and how I can improve? - shaded baby float

Poetry 1
The flowers open one after another, each with a cup of spring
Flowers bloom in blue sky
The delicate flowers are blooming beautiful experience
During the singing of the birds in the air
When flower buds
Smile of welcome spring
Delicate, beautiful float in the air
Flowers pale pink cherry carefree as a cloud
The sun is shining so bright and warm
Stabbing birds in the clear blue sky
Beautiful garden from Shine
The colors draw the eye in a field of flowers
And achieve all fields
Growths of colors are everywhere
With shades of variants in a series
The sun shone with a brilliant final
Spring is in the air
And feel the breeze
It is the scent of spring

Poem 2
It was a summer day
The birds were singing in a musical way
The grass with drops of morning dew
The high overcast sky blue
Here comes the Summer Breeze
Cotton clouds float by
Baby blue sky pictures
Summer smells fillAir
When we play with attention
Summer brings warm sunshine of Nice
Freedom
Laugh
Joy
Fun
You dream of long day of doing nothing in the summer
Far Horizons
Flower Surprise Field
Search for shells in the sand
To all these things and more
On the beach and along the coast
What
peaceful
nice
For a memorable summer rest

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